I think in your portfolio you have some nice images, but I think in this instance it lets you down slightly.
I think you need more texture on your building, and if you have used a direct light for your sun, you will need to increase its size, in the shadow parameters so that the shadows gently fade depending on how close the shadow is from origin. Also the reflections in the two windows are the sme, when I think it would look more realistic if they we different from one another.
I would also loose the 3 indoor plants in the bottom right corner, as I think they feel slightly out of place.
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steven haslehurst
said 31 May 2012 8:08 amI think in your portfolio you have some nice images, but I think in this instance it lets you down slightly.
I think you need more texture on your building, and if you have used a direct light for your sun, you will need to increase its size, in the shadow parameters so that the shadows gently fade depending on how close the shadow is from origin. Also the reflections in the two windows are the sme, when I think it would look more realistic if they we different from one another.
I would also loose the 3 indoor plants in the bottom right corner, as I think they feel slightly out of place.
I do however like some of your other work.
Steve
Prasanna Kumar
said 31 May 2012 8:13 am