The glass in the reflections, looks greener, and shorter. The concrete material feels flat, like it has no reflection. Also your background plate has a floating ghost street light, right above the triangle structure on the right. The glass in general needs work, paint gradients in photoshop, explore changing the layer type, a black and white gradient screened over the top of your glass helps give depth. Otherwise interesting design, good composition.
Quoting Peter Drew: The glass in the reflections, looks greener, and shorter. The concrete material feels flat, like it has no reflection. Also your background plate has a floating ghost street light, right above the triangle structure on the right. The glass in general needs work, paint gradients in photoshop, explore changing the layer type, a black and white gradient screened over the top of your glass helps give depth. Otherwise interesting design, good composition.
Thank you very much for your advice. All the things you said are true, and of course i will try to correct the problems. All the work was done during 3-4 hours and it was for a school project so that's the reason the image is not so good but thank you again for your great advices.
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Dori Sa
said 29 June 2012 11:17 amPeter Drew
said 29 June 2012 11:57 amLUMINA Architecture
said 29 June 2012 3:44 pmThank you very much for your advice. All the things you said are true, and of course i will try to correct the problems. All the work was done during 3-4 hours and it was for a school project so that's the reason the image is not so good but thank you again for your great advices.
Granit KRASNIQI
said 30 June 2012 3:52 amshum mir