I love the design concept but the people in the foreground are really distracting also, the woman that is in the way of seeing the central sculpture touch the floor should be moved slightly so that the viewers eye can flow into the image easier.
The area where the building is blown out in white due to the direct sunlight, would it be possible to retain some detail there, I think that would be very helpful to sell the scale of the building.
The only last thing that strikes me is that the image and design could benefit from the building being raised up off the floor so that the building seems to float - this is a personal preference.
Good work !
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Mankehue ArchViz
said 21 October 2012 5:43 pmhow you get that?
bye! and thanks for the inspiration
Niall Cochrane
said 22 October 2012 2:46 amThe area where the building is blown out in white due to the direct sunlight, would it be possible to retain some detail there, I think that would be very helpful to sell the scale of the building.
The only last thing that strikes me is that the image and design could benefit from the building being raised up off the floor so that the building seems to float - this is a personal preference.
Good work !