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Old June 15th, 2005   #1 (permalink)
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Dear friends:

Thank you for your comments for Skyscraper I posted yesterday. 3Dmax and Vray were used to build the models. Here is another one with the same model from different angle. Please take a look and give some more comments.



Thank you again for all your help.
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A glass curtainwall will never be so smooth. It is important to show some bump or variation for the building to appear 'real'. Enclosed are a photo of the Hancock building in Boston and how I treated it in a rendering. Different buildings will have different amounts of 'shimmer', but adding even a little to your rendering would really help.
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*...o!! here it is, a diff angle
*...im not into exterior rendering but i agree with Sir Ernest..

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Hi, Ernest:

Thank you for the great suggestion.
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Nice image, good balance in camera setup.

It's weird that one cannot see anything of the interior on the main body, and extremely well to the left (round tube). Add a fresnel effect ,-)

Careful with the lighting tubes... They end very abrupt (left of image)... Turn some on, some off, not all equal in force...

add some noise to the specular highlight ,-)


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ow yeah... and bump the glass a bit...
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