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Neoscape Critic · April 13th, 2006

Modeling/Texturing: Average
Lighting: We think the lighting is the strongest aspect of the image. The unique light zones work well together.
Composition: We like some things that you tried. The bottom is successful but the top half looks skewed.
C/O/D: We like that you took risks. It is debatable if all the risks worked. There is great creativity in the lighting.
Unity: The bottom has a bizarre yellow amber color which is not unified with the rest. There looks like an action is happening in the water, but we don’t think there is actually an action.
Brief: Could have some more lush foliage and be a bit cheerier.

April 13th, 2006	#2 (permalink)
Neoscape Critic Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Boston Posts: 51 Name: Sarah Moriarty	Re: chenliang-fianl Modeling/Texturing: Average Lighting: We think the lighting is the strongest aspect of the image. The unique light zones work well together. Composition: We like some things that you tried. The bottom is successful but the top half looks skewed. C/O/D: We like that you took risks. It is debatable if all the risks worked. There is great creativity in the lighting. Unity: The bottom has a bizarre yellow amber color which is not unified with the rest. There looks like an action is happening in the water, but we don’t think there is actually an action. Brief: Could have some more lush foliage and be a bit cheerier.