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Neoscape Critic · April 13th, 2006

Modeling/Texturing: There is really nice modeling in the rails and in the center tower. Unfortunately, the lighting obscures the modeling and you can’t appreciate the hard work.
Lighting: The lighting needs a bit more brightness in the left sky area maybe with a hot spot or sunset to brighten it up. The lighting techniques have a lot of potential.
Composition: The composition is striking. You took a chance with the angel but there is no sense of the dome. Suggestion-If the viewer could see the dome structure in the background that’d improve the overall success of the image.
C/O/D: The dragon is distracting and out of place but there is a nice overall creativity and some technically difficult aspects are noticeable.
Unity: Nicely unified
Brief: The image doesn’t speak to the purpose of the building.

April 13th, 2006	#2 (permalink)
Neoscape Critic Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Boston Posts: 51 Name: Sarah Moriarty	Re: DeCai Meng-Final Modeling/Texturing: There is really nice modeling in the rails and in the center tower. Unfortunately, the lighting obscures the modeling and you can’t appreciate the hard work. Lighting: The lighting needs a bit more brightness in the left sky area maybe with a hot spot or sunset to brighten it up. The lighting techniques have a lot of potential. Composition: The composition is striking. You took a chance with the angel but there is no sense of the dome. Suggestion-If the viewer could see the dome structure in the background that’d improve the overall success of the image. C/O/D: The dragon is distracting and out of place but there is a nice overall creativity and some technically difficult aspects are noticeable. Unity: Nicely unified Brief: The image doesn’t speak to the purpose of the building.