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Neoscape Critic · April 13th, 2006

Modeling/Texturing: The brown and tan walkway rail across the bottom is confusing. Everything else is average.
Lighting: The lighting needs more contrast. There are beginnings of zones but they fall short.
Composition: The foreground is poor and distracting. The space is confusing and you’re staring down at people’s heads.
C/O/D: Average, nothing sticks out as memorable.
Unity: The image is not unified because the foreground is so separate from the background.
Brief: The foliage looks brown and the space doesn’t seem to flow easily.

April 13th, 2006	#2 (permalink)
Neoscape Critic Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Boston Posts: 51 Name: Sarah Moriarty	Re: Salt Lake Graphics Society - Final Modeling/Texturing: The brown and tan walkway rail across the bottom is confusing. Everything else is average. Lighting: The lighting needs more contrast. There are beginnings of zones but they fall short. Composition: The foreground is poor and distracting. The space is confusing and you’re staring down at people’s heads. C/O/D: Average, nothing sticks out as memorable. Unity: The image is not unified because the foreground is so separate from the background. Brief: The foliage looks brown and the space doesn’t seem to flow easily.