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Old April 15th, 2006   #3 (permalink)
Scott Baumberger
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Name: Scott Baumberger


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Default Re: Branko Jovanovic - Final

Modeling/Texturing: The textures are good, and really help give a sense of scale to the building. The modeling is well done, but not outstanding.
Lighting: The lighting is good, I just wish there was more "stuff" to shade and highlight.
Composition: The overall composition is very good - the central column does a good job of directing the eye from the foreground to the shell of the dome. The trees do a nice job of adding a depth cue to the middle ground at the lower left.
C/O/D: Probably the weakest aspect of this image - as pleasant as the scene is, the overall effect is somewhat sterile and lifeless. More entourage would have really helped.
Unity: The scene is unified, but I would have liked to see a lot more color and more "punch".
Brief: The rendering does a good job of describing the architecture, but misses the mark by not fully immersing the viewer in the scene.
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