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Old April 15th, 2006   #3 (permalink)
Scott Baumberger
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Modeling/Texturing: Pretty good - I like the dirty vs. clean texturing on the main surfaces that give the scene a little more contrast.
Lighting: Very good - the light levels aid the composition and help lead the eye to the center of the space without resorting to anything gimmicky.
Compostion: Also very good, except for the unfortunate distortion at the top of the image. The planting does an excellent job of containing the image and re-focusing the eye back to the center. The diagonal line set up by the platforms is another subtle compositional device that works well.
C/O/D: Very creative and original, but not technically outstanding.
Unity: Very unified, nothing looks out of place and the scene looks finished.
Brief: Overall very good, but perhaps a little too dark. I would have liked to see a few more people in the foreground to generate some activity. And a bit more color here and there would have helped too - as it is the color palatte is very restrained which is a bit odd with such lush landscaping.

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