Re: Christophe Landrain - Final
Modeling / Texturing: The modeling is good, but not amazing. Texturing is better, and convincing, but there's not much to work with.
Lighting: The soft light is nice, but doesn't help guide the viewer through the space. I would have liked to see more light & dark areas to give the central space more "punch".
Composition: Overall it's good, I like how the pool leads you further into the space, but you're missing a strong focal point at the end of that axis. The glass pavilion at the lower right does a good job of containing the image. The biggest problem is the dark platforms at the top of the view which break the composition tend to distract more than help the scene. I would also like to see people to give some activity to the scene.
C/O/D: I like the quality and variation in the choice of landscaping, and the soft light reinforces the overall mood. Technically the image is somewhat average.
Unity: The strongest quality here. The image is very unified and the overall quality is very high.
Brief: Unfortunately, this view doesn't show off the dome as well as it could, and without people it is somewhat lifeless. That said, the natural aspect of the rendering is well done.
Last edited by Scott Baumberger; April 15th, 2006 at 04:18 PM.
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