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Old April 15th, 2006   #4 (permalink)
ikinman
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Name: Ian Kinman


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Default Re: Branko Jovanovic - Final

The modeling is well done, along with the texturing, especially the texturing on the rocks. The lighting is good as well, although it is not all that dramatic or informative of the space.

The composition is fine. We appreciate the low view from the ground, but it tends to accentuate the dark recesses at the bottom of the design. We don't think the camera tilt is helping here.

Some of the vegetation is done well, but there is not enough of it. Actually the place looks somewhat abandoned. (This is a rendering that would be helped by adding people.)

Overall the rendering is very 'unified', But a lack of people and plants make the space feel empty and not so grand.

A technically strong image, though.
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