Re: chenliang-fianl
We like this a lot. The ambient lighting, combined with the use of targeted lights calling attention to specific elements and works very well in this image. Highlighting the edges of the platforms highlights the design of the space as well as cementing the impression that this is an actual space used by actual people. We particularly like the way the central spire is lit. The model is built in order to enhance realism, with the glass divided into smaller panes, and giant light fixtures added in the center. The plant life is skillfully arranged and enhances the foreground / background of the composition, although we feel like we want to see more varied types of plants in an educational bio-dome. Another mild criticism is the texturing; it feels a bit too industrial. We wouldn’t expect to find the same material on the floors as well as the ceilings, for example. The water is well done, but I might like to see it slightly more transparent. Maybe some lighting underwater could have pushed this a bit further.
Although we like the composition, it starts getting a little to warped at the top, making it appear rather heavy. But we agree that you took some risks with this and applaud that.
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