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ikinman · April 15th, 2006

The modeling seems good, although the texturing needs work in terms of scale - both the floor and the water have an odd scale to them. The lighting is good and soft, but could use some more dark spots to accentuate the space. We like the angle of the shot, although the foreground needs some more work and detail.

The image makes the space seem inviting, although conventional. Overall it has a nice unified look although the foreground has a different feel to it. It fullfills the brief well, but we would like to see some more risks taken with this one.

April 15th, 2006	#3 (permalink)
ikinman Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: New York City Age: 42 Posts: 130 Name: Ian Kinman	Re: Salt Lake Graphics Society - Final The modeling seems good, although the texturing needs work in terms of scale - both the floor and the water have an odd scale to them. The lighting is good and soft, but could use some more dark spots to accentuate the space. We like the angle of the shot, although the foreground needs some more work and detail. The image makes the space seem inviting, although conventional. Overall it has a nice unified look although the foreground has a different feel to it. It fullfills the brief well, but we would like to see some more risks taken with this one.