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Alex Morris · April 18th, 2006

modelling and texturing:
modelling looks fine but could do with a bit more "real world" detail in the foreground; the texturing is scaled badly and a little too contrasty for where it is in the scene.
lighting:
quite bright and airy, but a liitle too green perhaps
composition:
well balanced but a little unsettling when pulled off vertical. The visual focus is the base of the pillar which seems to be uninhabited!
brief:
my take on the brief is that it was all people-focused ie. what are they doing at the various pause points within the scheme, so I would have either gone for a vignette or an overview. This is definitely in the overview category but the building seems a bit empty with all the people either on their own or in couples - where are all the families and hoards of people that want to visit the space?

April 18th, 2006	#5 (permalink)
Alex Morris Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: London Posts: 61 Name: Alex Morris	Re: Salt Lake Graphics Society - Final modelling and texturing: modelling looks fine but could do with a bit more "real world" detail in the foreground; the texturing is scaled badly and a little too contrasty for where it is in the scene. lighting: quite bright and airy, but a liitle too green perhaps composition: well balanced but a little unsettling when pulled off vertical. The visual focus is the base of the pillar which seems to be uninhabited! brief: my take on the brief is that it was all people-focused ie. what are they doing at the various pause points within the scheme, so I would have either gone for a vignette or an overview. This is definitely in the overview category but the building seems a bit empty with all the people either on their own or in couples - where are all the families and hoards of people that want to visit the space?