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Old May 16th, 2006   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Dengjian-Final

Modelling: Landscape elements look great, the dome looks good, although some extra detail wouldnt go amiss. The bridge to the right looks a bit rough, and the textures are not too good, maybe some more work needed in this area.
Lighting: Overall a good effect, but it looks a little bit bland. Maybe some extra light from inside the dome to pull the focus to the centre.

Composition: Love the camera angle, and the shot framing is excellent. This unique perspective really brings the building to life, reminds me of Jurassic Park. It also emphasises the scale of the project and the nature element. Impressive!

Overall a strong image, let down a little by the poor bridge foreground. The rest is great though. Some extra light in the dome would have helped lift the central focus. The intergration with nature in this image is perfect.
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