looking for critiques

skala67 · August 29th, 2005

I will attach few of my latest works. I would definitely appreciate some critiques and comments.

Thanks,

TJ

ecastillor · August 29th, 2005

very good...like the second one the best

IC · August 30th, 2005

Great images.

The people work brilliantly apart from in the third where you're just too close and can see what they actually are.

oyie · August 30th, 2005

nice images...the palm on the 1st image looks like its dried. i think the 2nd and 3rd image is a bit dark

Hierodifik · August 30th, 2005

Nice work. a little bit more of photoshop, and it's perfect.

Noise · August 30th, 2005

nice work - as mentioned, where the people are close, either replace them with photographs or simply omit them.

Same goes for the vegetation.

The fourth one - office tower, keep the building straight up and down, its quite easy to do this even without the camera corrction modifier. I am not sure the balloons or plane help either.

hope this helps

n

skala67 · August 30th, 2005

I couldn't agree more with all of your comments. this is my first time using the forum like this. It seems like a valuable resource. I will keep posting as I finish each job.
thanks to you all,
tj

ipdesigner · August 30th, 2005

*everything for me is very good!
*Did you do all of these alone?
*keep posting!

August 29th, 2005	#2 (permalink)
ecastillor Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: monterrey Posts: 851 Name: eduardo castillo	Re: looking for critiques very good...like the second one the best

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IC Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Edinburgh, Scotland Age: 36 Posts: 2,244 Name: Iain Collins	Re: looking for critiques Great images. The people work brilliantly apart from in the third where you're just too close and can see what they actually are. __________________ http://iainc.carbonmade.com/

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oyie Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Jeddah,SA Posts: 120 Name: Oyie Inanuran	Re: looking for critiques nice images...the palm on the 1st image looks like its dried. i think the 2nd and 3rd image is a bit dark

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Hierodifik Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Paris Age: 38 Posts: 28 Name: Jerome Denis	Re: looking for critiques Nice work. a little bit more of photoshop, and it's perfect. __________________ Come and visit edifik.fr and http://www.edifik.fr/blog/edifiknews.html CGI, animations and real time 3D for Architects, urbanists and real estate in France.

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Noise Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Partick Posts: 220 Name: Niall Cochrane	Re: looking for critiques nice work - as mentioned, where the people are close, either replace them with photographs or simply omit them. Same goes for the vegetation. The fourth one - office tower, keep the building straight up and down, its quite easy to do this even without the camera corrction modifier. I am not sure the balloons or plane help either. hope this helps n

August 30th, 2005	#7 (permalink)
skala67 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Arizona Age: 34 Posts: 408 Name: TJ Gardner	Re: looking for critiques I couldn't agree more with all of your comments. this is my first time using the forum like this. It seems like a valuable resource. I will keep posting as I finish each job. thanks to you all, tj

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ipdesigner Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: al ain-jebel ali-dubai Posts: 737 Name: Sherwin Boston	Re: looking for critiques everything for me is very good! Did you do all of these alone? *keep posting! __________________ my blog

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