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Bryan Jumarang - WIP 2
Hi guys here's my second update just added some colors and some basic mappings...wish i had more time...this is really fun...will post my next update as soon as possible...
need to hear your comments and suggestions...thanks
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Re: Bryan Jumarang - WIP
Wow, atmosphere and light is magical! Color scheme is great, the view and composition also! Your work is definitely one of the best, just few things I can point you to get even better quality - first - maping on the structure - balkonies has visible tiling. Perhaps it would look better with plain color, no texture, or larger map. Other thing is grass in the bottom. I would sugest little more sand, less grass...
Anyway, keep up, you are striving for the top! Good luck! |
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Re: Bryan Jumarang - WIP
just randomly applied those mapping haven't given any attention to those yet...will adjust those on my next update...thanks...wil add sands as suggested.
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Re: Bryan Jumarang - WIP
looking good...I agree with the others..grass...there should be mounds of soil too...and the water...could it be possible for the map to simulate water current running towards the sea wall?....i think it's just me(regarding water current)...but...this is really good...and more feasible to construct, if someone would ask me from an architect's point of view.
Good that you utilized skylight..for natural lighting, so, I think you also have out watch out for that in the render..  Keep it up....
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Re: Bryan Jumarang - WIP
 the scene blends the earths environment, giving it a really natural appearance, I can almost smell the leaves and the gushing of the water flowing in those spots. Very nice!!Keep up the good work!! |
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Re: Bryan Jumarang - WIP
Hey...i loved your first post...without textures...my opinion on this image is..
its lost its futuristic appearence....to much texuring... now its more like a temple.....over all great work!! |
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