Chutti - WIP

chutti · May 3rd, 2006

ok this is one of my approaches for the exterior. other versions are comming up. comment on this please.

chx · May 3rd, 2006

looks good, but I wouldn't go with a foggy atmosphere, the structure looks nice, so making it less visible isn't the right choice, well imo. good luck !

d.sign · May 3rd, 2006

I like the foggy aproach, but it would be good to add some dramatic light cutting through fog and shining some hilights on the structure and bridge... If you live it like that it would look too dark...

enigma · May 3rd, 2006

interesting...but i would have to agree with branko here, fog works best with dramatic lighting and a touch of contrast in the image. looking forward

SeanDeBoer · May 4th, 2006

I think the fog is interesting, it would be nice to have it interacting with the scene floating on the water with the tall bridge and dome popping out the top with the sun hitting it.
Good luck

e-YELLOWCABS.COM · May 6th, 2006

nice idea !
take care of the bridge, it should take to much importance and more, take of the way you model it : the cables look to big and the general shape is too agressive regards to the dome...
good luck

chutti · May 7th, 2006

thanks guys..here is another approach. the bridge is taken care off.

dbarc · May 7th, 2006

With reference to your first image, fog works best when you have objects near and far in the scene - if you moved the camera closer to the bridge you could have it looming out of the fog (and pretty much clear of fog in the foreground) giving a more dramatic sense of 3D

d.sign · May 8th, 2006

I agree, first one needed some touches but I think it got more potential. Second one is quite different, more focused on the inside of the dome...

chutti · May 10th, 2006

doin some matte painting practices its fun...

May 3rd, 2006	#2 (permalink)
chx Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Brussels Posts: 63 Name: Christophe Landrain	Re: Chutti - WIP looks good, but I wouldn't go with a foggy atmosphere, the structure looks nice, so making it less visible isn't the right choice, well imo. good luck !

May 3rd, 2006	#3 (permalink)
d.sign Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Belgrade Age: 38 Posts: 148 Name: Branko Jovanovic	Re: Chutti - WIP I like the foggy aproach, but it would be good to add some dramatic light cutting through fog and shining some hilights on the structure and bridge... If you live it like that it would look too dark...

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enigma Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Imus, Cavite, PH Age: 29 Posts: 342 Name: Bryan Jumarang	Re: Chutti - WIP interesting...but i would have to agree with branko here, fog works best with dramatic lighting and a touch of contrast in the image. looking forward __________________ WIP...

May 4th, 2006	#5 (permalink)
SeanDeBoer Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Perth Posts: 55 Name: Sean DeBoer	Re: Chutti - WIP I think the fog is interesting, it would be nice to have it interacting with the scene floating on the water with the tall bridge and dome popping out the top with the sun hitting it. Good luck

May 6th, 2006	#6 (permalink)
e-YELLOWCABS.COM Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: SIERENTZ Age: 42 Posts: 93 Name: PIERRE ZERROUKI	Re: Chutti - WIP nice idea ! take care of the bridge, it should take to much importance and more, take of the way you model it : the cables look to big and the general shape is too agressive regards to the dome... good luck

May 7th, 2006	#8 (permalink)
dbarc Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Oxford Posts: 256 Name: Dan Beinart	Re: Chutti - WIP With reference to your first image, fog works best when you have objects near and far in the scene - if you moved the camera closer to the bridge you could have it looming out of the fog (and pretty much clear of fog in the foreground) giving a more dramatic sense of 3D

May 8th, 2006	#9 (permalink)
d.sign Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Belgrade Age: 38 Posts: 148 Name: Branko Jovanovic	Re: Chutti - WIP I agree, first one needed some touches but I think it got more potential. Second one is quite different, more focused on the inside of the dome... Last edited by d.sign; May 8th, 2006 at 10:01 AM.

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