Dengjian-WIP - Page 2

d.sign · May 9th, 2006

First one is realy interesting, but I am affraid you would loose some points on the brief, second is great... hard to tell... Perhaps it is better to go with second and just add more light coming from the left! I think the transition from light to dark which goes from left to right is to much in favour of dark side, add more light to get the balance... Other elements are great as they are... Good luck!

enigma · May 9th, 2006

whoa ...i'm really speechless deng...good luck!

Mengxin · May 9th, 2006

It's looking good, keep it up!

don000 · May 9th, 2006

Thanks~

I want to show the atmosphere with the expo .

About the light from left,d.sign is right.I `m adding the light effect.

I don`t want to show ghastful scene.The guys provide some comments ,please.

don000 · May 11th, 2006

I have changed the crop ping size.

Brian Cassil · May 11th, 2006

That will be really nice. My only cirt is that the "light spikes" are crowding the top a little.

don000 · May 11th, 2006

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brian Cassil

That will be really nice. My only cirt is that the "light spikes" are crowding the top a little.

You mean the shapes are too terrible??

don000 · May 11th, 2006

It`s my final effect almost.But I need add many details,yet.

STRAT · May 11th, 2006

much awsomeness.

vince cox · May 11th, 2006

looking really good... Love the atmosphere & all the water

looking forward to seeing the rest of your detailing in there.

May 9th, 2006	#11 (permalink)
d.sign Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Belgrade Age: 38 Posts: 148 Name: Branko Jovanovic	Re: Dengjian-WIP First one is realy interesting, but I am affraid you would loose some points on the brief, second is great... hard to tell... Perhaps it is better to go with second and just add more light coming from the left! I think the transition from light to dark which goes from left to right is to much in favour of dark side, add more light to get the balance... Other elements are great as they are... Good luck!

May 9th, 2006	#12 (permalink)
enigma Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Imus, Cavite, PH Age: 29 Posts: 342 Name: Bryan Jumarang	Re: Dengjian-WIP whoa ...i'm really speechless deng...good luck! __________________ WIP...

May 9th, 2006	#13 (permalink)
Mengxin Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Shanghai, China Posts: 15 Name: Decai Meng	Re: Dengjian-WIP It's looking good, keep it up!

May 9th, 2006	#14 (permalink)
don000 Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Shanghai Posts: 41 Name: deng jian	Re: Dengjian-WIP Thanks~ I want to show the atmosphere with the expo . About the light from left,d.sign is right.I `m adding the light effect. I don`t want to show ghastful scene.The guys provide some comments ,please.

May 11th, 2006	#16 (permalink)
Brian Cassil Moderator Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Salt Lake City, Ut. Age: 36 Posts: 2,014 Name: Brian Cassil	Re: Dengjian-WIP That will be really nice. My only cirt is that the "light spikes" are crowding the top a little.

May 11th, 2006	#19 (permalink)
STRAT Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Cardiff, Wales, UK. Age: 36 Posts: 6,501 Name: Stephen Leworthy	Re: Dengjian-WIP much awsomeness. __________________

May 11th, 2006	#20 (permalink)
vince cox Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Perth Age: 38 Posts: 3 Name: vincent cox	Re: Dengjian-WIP looking really good... Love the atmosphere & all the water looking forward to seeing the rest of your detailing in there. __________________ vince

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