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Old May 19th, 2003   #1 (permalink)
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Hi all!
This is my latest project, so I would like to share it with you. There are some things I dont like 100%, byt all experiance counts
All comments are welcome.

Done in 3DS Max 5 and Photoshop, rendering time about 1 hour, AMD 2200+, 1Gb Ram, Gee Force4 2400 100L of coffee :ngesleep:

Regards Sergio!

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/fil...t-Sea-View.jpg

[ May 20, 2003, 01:32 AM: Message edited by: Sergio ]
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Hi Sergio, makes me want a holiday more than ever....

A few points:- This place looks sunny, from the deep blue of the sky to all the umbrellas up - but there are no noticable shadows. The water is also very vivid in comparison to the rest of the scene - maybe play about with the contrast between light and shade.

Your grass material looks a little stretched in the foreground.

Whilst looking at your picture my eye kept wandering back to the ship in the background - compositionaly its in an ideal place as a primary focus.

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Greetz Sergio!

I like this place ! Where it is to be build?

Looks like the most of things were done in Photoshop - this kinda puts down realism on this image. I must agree with andy on absence of shadows from palm trees [img]cool2.gif[/img] [img]cool2.gif[/img]

I like this pool !
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Hi guys!
Thanx for the crits.
It is going to be built at the South African coast, (Indian Ocean side)


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