SeanDeBoer

Heres the Final
I've gone for a traditional format which is dramatic and emotive, like what you would find on a postcard.
good luck to everyone

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Tim Woods

Modelling:
An impressive bit of modelling. The exterior has enough detail to engage when looked at closely, which really adds to to shot when taken as a whole. The foreground elements work well, and the landscape fits in, and doesnt stand out just compliments the main focus.
Lighting: Good, nice mood. You have a good balance between the outside and the internal lighting. Not trying to make the building look radioactive, has paid off.
Composition: Very strong. Simple and well balanced, with enough foreground and background activity to pull your eye around the image.

Overall a very complete and unified image. Its not the most dramatic, but the composition and excecution, acompanied by the mood work very well together. Excellent.

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Alex Morris

Nice image but the colours need unifying a bit more - the blue/purple of the building is a little strong and while this is a good way of getting the focus on the building it's at the expense of the overall believability. I think the glass dome would probably reflect more of the environment.

Neoscape Critic

M/T: Modeling and texturing is nice. The walkways outside the dome are well done.
L: Nice lighting-we also like the colors you chose.
Comp: The composition works well however the bottom left is distracing w/ the plant life.
C/O: This image is creative.
U:Nice-the image all works together well and the color is consistant.
B: The bridge sets the scene and the walkways around the dome are nice.

ikinman

Nicely done. A strong image with good composition and excellent modeling, not too overdone. Not a risky view, but well crafted. Nice foreground work. A bit more work on the secondary structure behind the biodome could help things a bit. The blue tone of the building could be toned down somewhat to better integrate the structure into the environment, but overall this is a solid image.