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May 19th, 2006
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Re: hailong wu - Final
Modelling: Well modelled, could do with a little bit of detail a the top, and maybe on the road.
Lighting: Well composed, the interior lighting looks good, and is well balanced with the rest of the image. The moody sky really compliments the image. Composition: Nice clean and well thought out image. But lacks a bit of emotion compared with your last image. Overall a strong image, but could have been more dramatic and dynamic. Clean, well modelled and well thought out. Just a little too bland.
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Re: hailong wu - Final
Nice modelling and composition. I'm not too sure about the colour palette - I find it a bit cold and not very inviting - perhaps if the interior shifted away from fluorescent green to warmer orange/yellow it might work better.
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Re: hailong wu - Final
M/T: Ok but nothing stands out
L: It is bright but there isn't enough detail in the highlighted areas Comp: The lasers are distracting. C/O: You took risks here which is nice to see U: The dome is glowing nicely which unifies the image B: Ok-clearly a dome but could be a bit more biological |
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May 20th, 2006
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Re: hailong wu - Final
Overall a nice image. The foreground needs some more detail, but there is some nice work on the interior, although the lighting is somewhat confusing. The laser light sabers are somewhat distracting from the image, and I think that the image would have a more pleasing serenity if they were toned down or eliminated. The sky has an odd scale to it, but the tonality works well.
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