alexandre

My take on the exterior -with a bow to the images of the floating world

Good luck everyone.

I've put up a few more words in the WIP section

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Tim Woods

Modelling:
The bits on the right look fine, although some of the old looking stone has been modelled a bit too simply, and it ruins the effect. The Dome itself is modelled well if not a strange take on it, it worked better from the inside. There is an awkward feel to from the outside, it feels like the dome should be reflective, and really catching the light, thus showing off the shape and form. But you havent really picked this out. Going instead for a more organic feel. Thats what lets it down slightly, it has an identity crisis.

Lighting: Looks a little flat, means nothing really jumps out.

Composition : I really like the composition. The waves crashing add a sense of movement and sound, giving the image life. I aslo like the dome almost crawling its way to the water from the land.

Overall i nice image. Let down by a lack of focus, the dome needed some more attention to make it a bit more vibrant.

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Alex Morris

I really like the composition and the depth of detail in this. I'm not too sure about the yellow colour on the left, and the curved glass should reflect more towards the edges of the dome.

Neoscape Critic

M/T: Nice overall texturing and lighting.
L: Good job creating a pleasant sunny day.
Comp: The left side has no focus
C/O: You departed from the model but used some creative ideas
U: What is that red patch in the right foreground? That is distracting.
B: This is a departure from the project-no bridge

ikinman

The modeling is well done, but the dome is somewhat confusing and the rendering would be helped by emphasizing the tectonics of how this structure is built. This image is a strong composition and the stormy foreground works very well, giving the image a strong kinetic sense. The lighting is a little flat, but the compositing works well. Overall it is a strong idea for a rendering, and it is pretty skillfully done – It feels like a place an experimental biodome would be. Some more sense of the structure of the dome and a better incorporation of the lighting on the dome to highlight its form would make the rendering even stronger.