jack chen- final

jack_chen · May 13th, 2006

so this one, good luck everyone !

Tim Woods · May 16th, 2006

Modelling: Good. Lots of interest in there. Bridge could do with some work, but the rest looks good. The landscape fits in very well.

Lighting: Nice and simple, day light has captured the mood well.

Composition: your composition is strong, but its also not very ambitious. The image is well balanced, has a good central focus. But it lacks a dynamic feel, and looks very traditional Arch Vis.

Overall a strong image, well rendered, well modelled, and nicely put together. I'm not a great fan of tradional images, so that side of it lets it down. Needs an injection of life in there somewhere.

Alex Morris · May 19th, 2006

Really nice image with a nice composition and sense of depth. My only comments would be to add some life to the building interior and change the shape of the moutain between the building and the bridge - it doesn't look right and clashes with the pod.

Neoscape Critic · May 19th, 2006

M/T: Nice overall-the palm trees are distracting because they are all the same
L: Good job lighting the scene-the dome and bridge are highlighted well
Comp: Horizon line is chosen well and works very nicely. The bridge is a bit too heavy.
C/O: Some nice creative aspects.
U: Great overall feel.
B: Good choice including the bridge, the dome and grounds look realistic.

ikinman · May 20th, 2006

Some nice work here. The modeling is well done, and the lighting works well. You did a good job with the composition and in choosing the elements to be composited. However there are some compositing issues, especially in the right side of the drawing – too many seams are showing. Also the palm trees are tiled. If you can’t get a large library of different trees, then you should quickly modify each one you repeat – move a branch or two on each one and the repetition will quickly disappear. The interior of the place could use some more life. A pretty conventional image, but nicely done.

May 16th, 2006	#2 (permalink)
Tim Woods Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 57 Name: Tim Woods	Re: jack chen- final Modelling: Good. Lots of interest in there. Bridge could do with some work, but the rest looks good. The landscape fits in very well. Lighting: Nice and simple, day light has captured the mood well. Composition: your composition is strong, but its also not very ambitious. The image is well balanced, has a good central focus. But it lacks a dynamic feel, and looks very traditional Arch Vis. Overall a strong image, well rendered, well modelled, and nicely put together. I'm not a great fan of tradional images, so that side of it lets it down. Needs an injection of life in there somewhere. __________________ www.the-neighbourhood.com 3d animation, film, post, vfx, visualisation www.vanilla-box.co.uk

May 19th, 2006	#3 (permalink)
Alex Morris Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: London Posts: 60 Name: Alex Morris	Re: jack chen- final Really nice image with a nice composition and sense of depth. My only comments would be to add some life to the building interior and change the shape of the moutain between the building and the bridge - it doesn't look right and clashes with the pod.

May 19th, 2006	#4 (permalink)
Neoscape Critic Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Boston Posts: 51 Name: Sarah Moriarty	Re: jack chen- final M/T: Nice overall-the palm trees are distracting because they are all the same L: Good job lighting the scene-the dome and bridge are highlighted well Comp: Horizon line is chosen well and works very nicely. The bridge is a bit too heavy. C/O: Some nice creative aspects. U: Great overall feel. B: Good choice including the bridge, the dome and grounds look realistic.

May 20th, 2006	#5 (permalink)
ikinman Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: New York City Age: 41 Posts: 130 Name: Ian Kinman	Re: jack chen- final Some nice work here. The modeling is well done, and the lighting works well. You did a good job with the composition and in choosing the elements to be composited. However there are some compositing issues, especially in the right side of the drawing – too many seams are showing. Also the palm trees are tiled. If you can’t get a large library of different trees, then you should quickly modify each one you repeat – move a branch or two on each one and the repetition will quickly disappear. The interior of the place could use some more life. A pretty conventional image, but nicely done.

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