henry

henry_lkg · May 13th, 2006

Our exterior final.Good luck all.

Tim Woods · May 19th, 2006

Modelling: Building looks fine. Could have put a bit more detail in glass skin. Looks a little basic at the moment. The boat on the right side of the image looks like an after thought.

Lighting: Nice mood for the image, not so keen on the aqua/green colour scheme going on. The dome reacts well to the light on the left side.

Composition: A nice composition, not too keen on the colour scheme. The hills of trees either side of the building look a bit cloned, and too regular.

Overall a nice compostion, not too keen on the aqua colour lagoon, but well concieved non the less. Could be more dynamic overall, maybe by lowering the light outside a little more and increasing the internal light.

Alex Morris · May 19th, 2006

Whats with the yellow and fluorescent green water? Otherwise a good composition which is nice and calm and reassuring. Its a bit hard to distinguish between the water and shore, and the bridge reflections are a little strong causing the boat to look as if its flying over the water rather than sitting on it.

Neoscape Critic · May 19th, 2006

M/T: Nice overall modeling and texturing.
L: It is successful because your eye goes to the dome. The sky is a bit distracting.
Comp: The trees and bridge are distracting and the boat seems too big.
C/O: Nice overall, no elements that are overwhelmingly creative.
U: The image is unified.
B: There isn't much bio information and the bridge doesn't hold an important place in the image.

ikinman · May 20th, 2006

Overall we like this image but we are having some problems with certain specifics which are very distracting. Specifically the water, which we can’t quite figure out. The sky/water coloring needs some more work, and the waters edge is very confusing – we’re not certain if the water is too transparent at the edge or if it’s leaping out at the building. Also, the sailboat at the left is way out of scale. Other than those details, this works pretty well as a serene image of the place. We’ll visit it.

May 19th, 2006	#2 (permalink)
Tim Woods Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 57 Name: Tim Woods	Re: henry Modelling: Building looks fine. Could have put a bit more detail in glass skin. Looks a little basic at the moment. The boat on the right side of the image looks like an after thought. Lighting: Nice mood for the image, not so keen on the aqua/green colour scheme going on. The dome reacts well to the light on the left side. Composition: A nice composition, not too keen on the colour scheme. The hills of trees either side of the building look a bit cloned, and too regular. Overall a nice compostion, not too keen on the aqua colour lagoon, but well concieved non the less. Could be more dynamic overall, maybe by lowering the light outside a little more and increasing the internal light. __________________ www.the-neighbourhood.com 3d animation, film, post, vfx, visualisation www.vanilla-box.co.uk

May 19th, 2006	#3 (permalink)
Alex Morris Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: London Posts: 60 Name: Alex Morris	Re: henry Whats with the yellow and fluorescent green water? Otherwise a good composition which is nice and calm and reassuring. Its a bit hard to distinguish between the water and shore, and the bridge reflections are a little strong causing the boat to look as if its flying over the water rather than sitting on it.

May 19th, 2006	#4 (permalink)
Neoscape Critic Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Boston Posts: 51 Name: Sarah Moriarty	Re: henry M/T: Nice overall modeling and texturing. L: It is successful because your eye goes to the dome. The sky is a bit distracting. Comp: The trees and bridge are distracting and the boat seems too big. C/O: Nice overall, no elements that are overwhelmingly creative. U: The image is unified. B: There isn't much bio information and the bridge doesn't hold an important place in the image.

May 20th, 2006	#5 (permalink)
ikinman Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: New York City Age: 41 Posts: 130 Name: Ian Kinman	Re: henry Overall we like this image but we are having some problems with certain specifics which are very distracting. Specifically the water, which we can’t quite figure out. The sky/water coloring needs some more work, and the waters edge is very confusing – we’re not certain if the water is too transparent at the edge or if it’s leaping out at the building. Also, the sailboat at the left is way out of scale. Other than those details, this works pretty well as a serene image of the place. We’ll visit it.

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