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Old February 13th, 2003   #1 (permalink)
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radiosity times:2hours
render time:15min(3000weight)
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Old February 13th, 2003   #2 (permalink)
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nice piccy as always, but:
- where are you focussing on? on what building??
- why are there so many artifacts in the shadow?
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- where are you focussing on? on what building??
I agree with quizzy. The camera angle is not helping. Maybe it's part of an animation, but we can't tell.
If you're focusing on both buildings, maybe you should try to show all of them, not parts. I think it makes the image lack some meaning, I don't know....
But, as usual, the man with a P4 processor in his head (that would explain how he manages to render so many good works in so little time :angerazz: )came up with a nice image.
PS: Chen, don't forget to watermark your pictures! :angewink:
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thanks
about focussing,did you know Chinese painting,this style have many focussing,you can not find one main foucussing,Different from the clairvoyance skill method of the oil painting.i think that Cultural difference
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about focussing,did you know Chinese painting,this style have many focussing,you can not find one main foucussing,Different from the clairvoyance skill method of the oil painting.i think that Cultural difference
that's a very interesting thought...
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i don´t understand....hisn´t centrality more than explicit in there?
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about focussing,did you know Chinese painting,this style have many focussing,you can not find one main foucussing,Different from the clairvoyance skill method of the oil painting.i think that Cultural difference
Maybe. But it still looks more like a "passing by" shot, makes us expect to see where you are going. On the painting you are showing, seems the artist is focusing on the gap between the 2 hills, where people are passing thru.
I don't know, maybe I'm no ready for the Orient yet.... :angewink:
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the image seem too flat and gray.
The sun r back the camera, so the building need more sunlight. i think...,
the car in the middle have a wrong shadow, (the shadow does´t correspond with the direction of the rest of the shadows)

maybe u need move the camera more to the right to see the Right side of the left building.

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