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Old July 25th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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very nice images, but in the first 2 ones you can´t see easily the facade, but the last one is amazing.
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Ill keep it brief today

The daylighting on the first 2 is PERFECT, the people in the 3rd and 4th one dont look right (too bright/saturated maybe...), and the modelling in the last one is excellent. Very well done.
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Definitely the last one I really can't see the building on the first two, but nice daylight though. Trees and ppl need a little post on the third. But the building model looks really great.
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i like the courtyard images i think the building is out of place in the environment it's going.( first 2 images ) but then again that's just my opinion..great images overall
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thanks up stair ever one, I was reall to read that opinions,I am going to attach importace to do it that is detail of drawing.
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nice works,
as my opinions, same as juses's, the first 2 need lighter.
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