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Old June 27th, 2003   #1 (permalink)
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My first posting in WIP, just an interior of guest room. Modeling in AutoCAD, setting material and lighting in VIZ and final rendering in Lightscape. Pls need some comment and suggestion...

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Its a good start but I think you need to process your lightscape solution for longer as it looks a bit flat to me.

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take a look at the UVW mapping of your wood on the doors and table. Wood grain direction is wrong. Grain usually follows the vertical and horizontal length of a piece. For example, the grain should run vertically on the vertical pieces on the windows. The mapping on the seat cushions is also wrong. The top looks fine but the sides are wrong. It looks like you just used a planar UVW on them.

Also, your shadows are not consistant. The books on the table don't show any shadows at all. Is that glass on the coffee table?

Nice modeling, but you need to work on the lighting & shadows and mapping of you textures.

Please send a update! Your very close to a nice render.

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