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Re: Office Building
Comment? "WOW!"
Personally, I think you need some clouds in the sky to help break up the composition a bit. Also the gaussian blur on the background building looks a little dodgey; but thats just me. The perspective is awesome tho - it looks massive! Amazing work. |
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Re: Office Building
dear yadi, can u tell me how much is your original rendering pixel out put size? and ur rendering time presets?
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Re: Office Building
Hi Ky Lane, thank you for your advice.
Anindia, original pixel is 1200x800 px, it tooks 8 hr for rendering on intel dual core D930. No noise reducer. The sun on glass is original from maxwell. Cheers, Yadi |
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Re: Office Building
I like it very much except for 1 thing, wich makes me like it not that much....
get rid of the lens flare. It cuts the visual from achieving the effect of the eye climbing from the bottom up.... |
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August 27th, 2006
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Re: Office Building
I think that this rendering is good,but the reflection is not completely convincing ,no glass can reflect like that.Break up the eveness a little-noise,etc. Also put something in the foreground to improve the composition.The image needs some depth.Other then that -very good !
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