Guest's villa in the Egyptian embassy

ahmed mansy · September 3rd, 2006

hi

these r 2 shots of the guest's villa (which was part of our semester project) i just concentrated on that part and made the visualisation.

i would be appreciated to know ur comments about it

Thanks

Justin Hunt · September 3rd, 2006

Firstly, lower the viewpoint, its distorting the scale and not flattering. Use the water as a framing element.

The lighting is too harsh of the skys used

The fountain splash is off centre to the fountain

Good modeling, with better lighting this will be enhanced greatly

Hope I don't sound too harsh

JHV

Thiago de Andrade · September 3rd, 2006

The first image has a strange background that doesn't seem to fit. Look the illumination on the water fountain. It's sun lit.

But Justin said it all. Follow his advices.

Bugga_Guy · September 3rd, 2006

Not bad however a few things - In the first rendering, the water from the fountain is too tall and its floating! Get rid of that stormy background - makes the image look scary

In the second image (again the water fountain is floating) that lamp at the top left is odd its floating - looks out of scale. Either cheat the pole in more or get rid of it

mmundy · June 13th, 2007

Beautiful model... only the RPC's detract from it.

Try getting some 3d image-mapped people, or RPC's that are not Federal Agents in dark suits. You can get some of thes for free on-line. Try www.got3d.com or www.lowpoly.com

September 3rd, 2006	#2 (permalink)
Justin Hunt Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Brisbane Age: 34 Posts: 1,380 Name: Justin Hunt	Re: Guest's villa in the Egyptian embassy Firstly, lower the viewpoint, its distorting the scale and not flattering. Use the water as a framing element. The lighting is too harsh of the skys used The fountain splash is off centre to the fountain Good modeling, with better lighting this will be enhanced greatly Hope I don't sound too harsh JHV

September 3rd, 2006	#3 (permalink)
Thiago de Andrade Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Brasília Age: 28 Posts: 132 Name: Thiago de Andrade	Re: Guest's villa in the Egyptian embassy The first image has a strange background that doesn't seem to fit. Look the illumination on the water fountain. It's sun lit. But Justin said it all. Follow his advices.

September 3rd, 2006	#4 (permalink)
Bugga_Guy Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 357 Name: Brian Zidovec	Re: Guest's villa in the Egyptian embassy Not bad however a few things - In the first rendering, the water from the fountain is too tall and its floating! Get rid of that stormy background - makes the image look scary In the second image (again the water fountain is floating) that lamp at the top left is odd its floating - looks out of scale. Either cheat the pole in more or get rid of it

June 13th, 2007	#5 (permalink)
mmundy Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Liberty, MO Posts: 7 Name: Michael Mundy	Re: Guest's villa in the Egyptian embassy Beautiful model... only the RPC's detract from it. Try getting some 3d image-mapped people, or RPC's that are not Federal Agents in dark suits. You can get some of thes for free on-line. Try www.got3d.com or www.lowpoly.com

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