Minimalist room (VRAY)

sunshinebetter · September 18th, 2006

Hello everyone i would like to introduce you at my latest work!
it was render in 3200x2400 for a 30x20cm print
3dsmax8+VRay1.5rc2 And some Ps, i'm really satisfate with new engine of vray
All work was about 3 days with highresolution render
hope you enjoy

TRANSPARENT · September 18th, 2006

I like everything except the pillows...take those out or fix them, and everything will look great. Nice job.

alikashan · September 19th, 2006

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Originally Posted by TRANSPARENT

I like everything except the pillows...take those out or fix them, and everything will look great. Nice job.

completely agreed and to add i just love the roses in the image they are eyecatchinga and strong very nice and floor is beautiful except it kinda look wet to me when its meeting with the sofa.

Neight · September 19th, 2006

Nice work. I just wanted to add that the specular highlight on the floor is under the couch. I'm not sure if that's possible.

martin walker · September 19th, 2006

I love the detail on the couch, the piping on the cushions etc...nice job

Koper · September 19th, 2006

love everything in this image, very nice. can't see any problems with the 'pilows' or the floor.

I just would like to see the cofee mug maybe in red please.

IC · September 19th, 2006

I like the cushions too although the foreground one needs piping or an edge of some sort.
The highlight on the floor is strange but if you could tell where the source was it would be ok.

Island J · September 19th, 2006

Add some drama, make the coffee drip down the side of the cup, but not enough to touch the book, like half way down, 2-3 drips and you got it. And add some realism to the liquid.
It IS nice tough.
Jose'

Koper · September 19th, 2006

Island J, its called "minimalist room", thus there is no tention and minimal, if at all, movement, 'cause movement creates tention

sunshinebetter · September 19th, 2006

Thanks all for C&C!
Koper, you said everything! thanks for understand my work!

September 18th, 2006	#1 (permalink)
sunshinebetter Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Brazil Age: 23 Posts: 8 Name: Pedro Pasturczak	Minimalist room (VRAY) Hello everyone i would like to introduce you at my latest work! it was render in 3200x2400 for a 30x20cm print 3dsmax8+VRay1.5rc2 And some Ps, i'm really satisfate with new engine of vray All work was about 3 days with highresolution render hope you enjoy

September 18th, 2006	#2 (permalink)
TRANSPARENT Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Juneau, AK Age: 27 Posts: 50 Name: Aaron Logan	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) I like everything except the pillows...take those out or fix them, and everything will look great. Nice job.

September 19th, 2006	#4 (permalink)
Neight Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Kyoto, Japan Posts: 19 Name: Nate Briggs	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) Nice work. I just wanted to add that the specular highlight on the floor is under the couch. I'm not sure if that's possible.

September 19th, 2006	#5 (permalink)
martin walker Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Yorkshire Age: 36 Posts: 312 Name: Martin Walker	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) I love the detail on the couch, the piping on the cushions etc...nice job

September 19th, 2006	#6 (permalink)
Koper Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Hague, Holland Age: 26 Posts: 1,048 Name: AdriaaN van Jaarsveld	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) love everything in this image, very nice. can't see any problems with the 'pilows' or the floor. I just would like to see the cofee mug maybe in red please.

September 19th, 2006	#7 (permalink)
IC Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Edinburgh, Scotland Age: 36 Posts: 2,261 Name: Iain Collins	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) I like the cushions too although the foreground one needs piping or an edge of some sort. The highlight on the floor is strange but if you could tell where the source was it would be ok. __________________ http://iainc.carbonmade.com/

September 19th, 2006	#8 (permalink)
Island J Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Tortola Posts: 49 Name: Jose' de Castro	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) Add some drama, make the coffee drip down the side of the cup, but not enough to touch the book, like half way down, 2-3 drips and you got it. And add some realism to the liquid. It IS nice tough. Jose'

September 19th, 2006	#9 (permalink)
Koper Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Hague, Holland Age: 26 Posts: 1,048 Name: AdriaaN van Jaarsveld	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) Island J, its called "minimalist room", thus there is no tention and minimal, if at all, movement, 'cause movement creates tention

September 19th, 2006	#10 (permalink)
sunshinebetter Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Brazil Age: 23 Posts: 8 Name: Pedro Pasturczak	Re: Minimalist room (VRAY) Thanks all for C&C! Koper, you said everything! thanks for understand my work!

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