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Old September 19th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Hi All,

Just finished this image for sales brochure. Rendered with Viz 2007, Vray 1.5 and a little photoshop. Any comments appreciated.

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Looks very nice, but there are subtle blotches everywhere. I WISH I could tell you how to get rid of those, I always have that same problem, but that would be my only crit. It looks great other than that!
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Image looks fine but it also looks empty, it would look better if you could populate it with people, a tree in the foreground perhaps, something to make it look lively.

Just my 2cents.
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Look very nice to me, but you need to add a little more life to the scene...
more cars, some people, and that's it...

Good job...
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