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Old September 25th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Hi there! My latest work... C&C always welcome.. ( I know the street is a bit messed up... ) Tell me what do you think..
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Old September 25th, 2006   #2 (permalink)
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pretty cool background you have for working on. I would give some attention to the white building material. Stucco or whatever it may be, I would stay away from procedural maps and try to get/create/paint a better texture for it. A displacement map on the stone walls would also look great.
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I was trying to immitate a technique they use in Greece to build houses where stucco depth varies in an abstract way... As for the stone walls I tried displacement but I couldn't achieve a good result as a lack of knowledge... I am still experimenting in displacement and cannot get the results I want...
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One comment. The bumpy white stucco or adobe finish looks a bit too pumpy, either shrink the size or reduce the bump maybe.

otherwise looks great
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OOOoohhh please tell me where that is. I got a flash back of Mykonos when I went there for my honeymoon.
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OOOoohhh please tell me where that is. I got a flash back of Mykonos when I went there for my honeymoon.
Well before you go to Mykonos (if you went via boat) you passed through an island called Syros. It has a small village named Kini... I hope you enjoyed yourselves there... I just returned from Santorini which was fantastic (not from honeymoon ... too young for these stuff lol)
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nice work mate. Do try to fix the bump maps, I agree that the stone displacement map is a good idea. Photo montage is good, camera matching is accurate, you could tweak the roads a bit.
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The camera match is good.. I like that.. But I cant see any real shadows..

If you look around at the surrounding landscape, you can see quite harsh shadows. The sun is pretty strong over in that part of the world, so you would have some dark shadows..

I think a bit of GI or something as well to give us some depth in those little "nooks and crannies"..

And yes, the stucco looks to bumpy / smooth.. but already mentioned..

But it does seem to fit in fairly well with the photos..

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that was a great work man

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