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Old September 28th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Original res 2500x1400 : Maxwell Render v1.1.
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Great lighting solution, as expected from Maxwell.

And now some C&C's:

The rooms on the sides of the images are dead black, kinda makes image look incomplete. And I'm not sure what the white material is for the light fixtures, but they look odd, as though they need to be semi-transparent, or reflective or both or something?? And some plants would help soften the image as well. But great start nonetheless
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Thanks Brian, yes I left the side rooms unlit for reasons of render-time, in an indeal world we'd have them lit and full of fax machines etc......the underside of the lights would benefit from some reflection, I'll work on that for the next project we use them on! Thanks for the look, appreciate it.
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The image is good but it's definitely to dark over all for my tastes, I also agree about the side offices. Also because you have so many monitors you could have turned the screens of these monitors into emitters so you would get light spilling onto the desks and walls. Good job, how long did it take to render?
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Thanks Devin, appreciate it.
Yes the screens are mxi [see below] but the overall 'fill-light' required from the Ceiling lights knocks them out........a render of just the mxi screens would be interesting. Rendertime about 24hrs@2500 wide, sl was 14ish.

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