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Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Detroit, MI
Age: 29
Posts: 360
Name: Chuck Morgan |
that's a nice image, but...
i think the DOF is a little too much, mainly because the couch is in focus, then right behind it is the background thats blurred. it just seems to be too much contrast. if you moved the camera up a bit that might help, giving the effect a little more distance to become blurry. right now it looks like the background was ps'd in... besides that, the leather material needs some attention. the cusions and arm rest in the foreground look to reflective/white to me. the noise looks good, just too much at the shelving behind the couch. how did you do the rug? i like the colors and the blue underneath the coffee table... chuck |
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