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Old October 3rd, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Default latest arch. vis work for yours c/c

hi all,
Here is my latest arch. vis work for all yours expert comments to make this image more better.
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Default Re: latest arch. vis work for yours c/c

My suggestion is to try and do your internal lights more accurately - perhaps using ies lighting rather than omni's.... also im not sure what the bright spot in the balcony ceiling is...

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Also try to apply a texture to your walls... Don't leave them solid.
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Default Re: latest arch. vis work for yours c/c

Nice exterior lighting solution. I suggest working on your textures some and softening up the area around the building (such as landscaping, curbs, and sidewalk). If it is located in a plaza, some paving stones with planters would be nice.
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Default Re: latest arch. vis work for yours c/c

Thanks all

FlytE as per your suggestion i have started the interior part from the scratch.

Ovzoc & 3DIFX ya you people are right building is looking with very solid and new with no dirt or scratches on the wall.

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Soon will post the new version

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