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Old October 4th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Another project for the client. This is the room for his 12 years old son. waiting for c&c.
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I like it very much! MAybe you could add some details (like the spot lights cause light comes from an unknown source... ) but I'm ok with this...

Beautiful image.. Congrats!
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They look great Jeff.... IES lights look lovely
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looks really good (lucky friggin 12 year old kid!) only thing that catches my eye is you have a alot of lights in the scene with no actual modeled sources. possibly can lights or something in the cieling in front of the casework, the ies lights look good, but they need the appearance of a source.

Might want to adjust the desk lamp a bit, its burning the floor, but the shade really isn't that bright, it needs balanced a bit.
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Thanks for all the comments. Most people mention about the light source. Due to the deadline so I don't bother to put them. Here is another scene with the light source which I did last night after meeting with the client.
about the desk lamp somehow doesn't turn out like the side lamp. same material and light setting. any idea why?
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what privlage.
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