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Old October 10th, 2006   #1 (permalink)
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Default Some Recent (ish) stuff

Haven't posted in a while, just been lazily reading all of your threads instead, so i thought i would put up some stuff. Some better than others due mainly to time constraints and/or lack of info, any opinions would be good as i'm thinking of reworking some of them just for myself. Thanks in advance
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Default Re: Some Recent (ish) stuff

Nice Theres something about the night one that i really like... i think its maybe because you went to the trouble of actually rendering the outside during night rather than using a background photo. Well played.
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Default Re: Some Recent (ish) stuff

I love the third image of the stairwell - it reminds me of an Edward Hopper painting (can't remember the name of it though).

The bottles in the final picture look odd when they're on their side - like they've had the bottoms chopped off or something...
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Default Re: Some Recent (ish) stuff

Thanks for the quick feedback guys, Thanks Andy this is the internal shot of another render (Attached) that i posted a few months back. So I had to model the externals as it was all part of the design if i had time i think i would always prefer to do that, but i suppose if I was doing a penthouse or something it would be hard to justify modeling the whole city for the view. still it would be cool if someone did.

Thanks Derek i noticed after i posted that some of the bottles are floating Also haha its amazing what you spot when its too late, cheers for the comments on the stairs I'm ashamed to say i have never heard of the artist you mentioned but will google it shortly as this is one i would like to re work, now there is no client i would like to do a realy eiree sinister looking version
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Ah its appears i had heard of Edward Hopper after all just seen the work and recognised it, I'm Crap with names so thanks even more now i know who you meant
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I think the one I'm thinking of is Stairway at 48 Rue de Lille, Paris, although I was sure he did one at a similar viewpoint to yours.

He did quite a few of a lighthouse at Cape Cod that hopefully I'll find time to model at some point...
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Well If you find time soon you can use them for that finding shores comp on the home page I'm looking for a light house for that myself.
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Sounds good, but I'm getting married in a week and a half so spare time is pretty rare right now!!
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Congratulaions I reckon the wedding will be more rewarding than modelling a lighthouse anyway
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Default Re: Some Recent (ish) stuff

nice images.....I particularly like the lighting.

My crit concerns the sparseness of these images. It just seems like they need some colour, plants, decorator items or something.
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