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Old November 29th, 2003   #1 (permalink)
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WIP. Model is completed. HDRI lighting only. Comments if you so please. Going to add some vegetations soon.

Max 6.0, VRay, Photoshop.

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Old November 29th, 2003   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Xavier,

What u did in photoshop?

ps:would you mind sharing your old avatar?
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I pumped up the midtone level just a bit.

I see my old avatar in your new one already....I don't mind.
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Hahahaha

I see that i´m now a "member" of Tuninho´s "Hall o Fame"...
If you are collecting old avatars, ask Rick Eloy for the "Holywood" one...
To say the true, i´d rather that one, Rick !
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Hi Xmen,

The test seems pretty good for a while.
I feel the lack of a direct sun to give some drama. But probably it was your intention.
Maybe was a good idea if you could render this scene with other solutions (GI for example)so that we could have something to compare.

PS:Thanks for sharing!

UIRSO: Thank you too!
My intention was not to build some avatar´s museum but this can be one great idea. :ebiggrin:
This is supposed to be a "hall of great people"
I´m sad because there ain´t much space to put everybody. Anyway it´s a begining. Who knows in an animated version?
But for sure I´ll keep Rick´s old one.

Fala sééééééério!
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Hi xman
how did you set up hdri to get them lit the scene.
i'd appreciate your help.
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Ok, after countless requests (2, to be honest )...The old Hollywood avatar of mine is back! :ngelaugh: :ngelaugh: :ngelaugh: And it's here to stay, I'm afraid..hehehehe... Be sure to update yours, Tuninho!!!
Now, as for the image: I agree that the sunlight is missing there. That will give you a much better sense of depth. Keep us updated.
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the watermark is annoying, i know that this kind of caution is importante but in this case it become like a bad jpg compression
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Watermark is necessary...sorry. I'll update the project in a few day b/c I'm working on something else right now. This first version, I was going for a sundown low light look. I'll do one mid-day with lots of contrast and I'll update textures.
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I like the alone feeling the image has going, however, it needs something to pop in my opinion... a single object on the stairs... something of interest, glowing maybe, inside? or a lonely stranger walking in the distance?

Looking good.
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