Guys this is the first piece of work that i have posted that has ever been anywhere near completion.
Thanks to Jeff Patton for the building shell
Some models taken from Evermotion
Please comment and criticise this render as much as you can guys, i really want to improve.
And before you comment on the curtains

i agree that they look wrong and horrible and i am currently trying to fix them as we speak
Other than that, please help me improve
Cheers guys
Edit: The render has been done in Mental Ray 3.6, with MRsun MRsky, MRphysicalsky, p/graphic exposure and FG. No post work has been done
The image is straight from Max but, not too sure why it looks kind of fuzzy, looks fine on my screen, think its the compression from the original render so that i could post it on here.