my 1st exterior rendering with vray

ps · July 21st, 2003

My first posting in WIP, just an exterior of an house. Modeling in AutoCAD and render with vray advance. need some comment and suggestion...

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/fil...1pubcopy_1.jpg

schmoron13 · July 21st, 2003

It's pretty good.

First off, I'd lose the shrubbery up front. Between the large bushes/flowers/ and the tall grass and weeds, the building acts as more of a background. Also, the combination of the building, plants and people doesn't work for me. I definitely don't like the people; they just don't seem to sit well in the scheme. The building looks great, but it appears a little flat.

ALL together, I think it's a great start.
what are you using: (equip/specs)?

once again, good job

Arnel · July 21st, 2003

I agree with schmoron get rid of those shrubs it's floating. Try to change you AA filter also to get a sharper image try catmull-rom and also play with color mapping.

It's a good start though.

ps · July 22nd, 2003

thanks for the critics ,i´m new in the business, look schomoñom 13 my equip is a dual xeon 3.06 , 2gb memory graphic card 128mb ATI radeon 9100 but i dont known what do you mean by "specs".
and you Arnel what is a AA filter and a catnull-room and color mapping sorry about my english and about all of my question but i'm relly new in this world " great world".
thank you by yours reply i apreciat a lot .
Paulo Silva
best regards for all

Praia da barra -Aveiro Portugal

" [img]cool2.gif[/img] by the away the weather is great and the beach is full of beautifull girsl"

Arnel · July 22nd, 2003

Under depth of field/anti-aliasing roll out you can see different types of AA (anti-aliasing filter) for a very sharp image use catmull-rom.

For color mapping just see its roll out, play with the exponential dark and bright multiplier to get a descent image of your taste.

ps · July 22nd, 2003

now i uderstand what you mean by AA filter i know where it is but i´ve never change the settings and the color mapping i know now what is i´ve done this rendering following the osmosis tuturiais i've learn a lot with them (thanks for osmosis and for all every one that posts tuturiais and crititcs).
look Arnel i'm going to make another rendering and post in this forum.
thank you very much for you spend time with my post
Paulo Silva
best regards

Richard McCarthy · July 22nd, 2003

Nice rendering PS.

I think the entourage (people) might obscuring the good view a bit and cluttering up the picture. (they also look slightly irrelvent)

But I really like your grass rendering. Are they CG or photo-composite?

-RM

ps · July 22nd, 2003

Hi Richard, thank you for the critics, i have to learn a lot with all of you , i´m in the begining, but about your question what i have used to make grass look like grass is the vray displacement tool is great and easy to use.

Paulo Silva

best regards

July 21st, 2003	#2 (permalink)
schmoron13 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Syracuse, NY, Walnut Creek, CA Age: 29 Posts: 331 Name: Doron Serban	It's pretty good. First off, I'd lose the shrubbery up front. Between the large bushes/flowers/ and the tall grass and weeds, the building acts as more of a background. Also, the combination of the building, plants and people doesn't work for me. I definitely don't like the people; they just don't seem to sit well in the scheme. The building looks great, but it appears a little flat. ALL together, I think it's a great start. what are you using: (equip/specs)? once again, good job __________________ Doron Serban

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Richard McCarthy Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 757 Name: Richard McCarthy	Nice rendering PS. I think the entourage (people) might obscuring the good view a bit and cluttering up the picture. (they also look slightly irrelvent) But I really like your grass rendering. Are they CG or photo-composite? -RM __________________ Don't mess with my hat !!

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July 21st, 2003	#1 (permalink)
ps Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: portugal Posts: 10 Name: paulo silva	My first posting in WIP, just an exterior of an house. Modeling in AutoCAD and render with vray advance. need some comment and suggestion... http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/fil...1pubcopy_1.jpg

July 21st, 2003	#3 (permalink)
Arnel Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Philippines Posts: 182 Name: Arnel Aguel	I agree with schmoron get rid of those shrubs it's floating. Try to change you AA filter also to get a sharper image try catmull-rom and also play with color mapping. It's a good start though.

July 22nd, 2003	#4 (permalink)
ps Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: portugal Posts: 10 Name: paulo silva	thanks for the critics ,i´m new in the business, look schomoñom 13 my equip is a dual xeon 3.06 , 2gb memory graphic card 128mb ATI radeon 9100 but i dont known what do you mean by "specs". and you Arnel what is a AA filter and a catnull-room and color mapping sorry about my english and about all of my question but i'm relly new in this world " great world". thank you by yours reply i apreciat a lot . Paulo Silva best regards for all Praia da barra -Aveiro Portugal " [img]cool2.gif[/img] by the away the weather is great and the beach is full of beautifull girsl"

July 22nd, 2003	#5 (permalink)
Arnel Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Philippines Posts: 182 Name: Arnel Aguel	Under depth of field/anti-aliasing roll out you can see different types of AA (anti-aliasing filter) for a very sharp image use catmull-rom. For color mapping just see its roll out, play with the exponential dark and bright multiplier to get a descent image of your taste.

July 22nd, 2003	#6 (permalink)
ps Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: portugal Posts: 10 Name: paulo silva	now i uderstand what you mean by AA filter i know where it is but i´ve never change the settings and the color mapping i know now what is i´ve done this rendering following the osmosis tuturiais i've learn a lot with them (thanks for osmosis and for all every one that posts tuturiais and crititcs). look Arnel i'm going to make another rendering and post in this forum. thank you very much for you spend time with my post Paulo Silva best regards

July 22nd, 2003	#8 (permalink)
ps Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: portugal Posts: 10 Name: paulo silva	Hi Richard, thank you for the critics, i have to learn a lot with all of you , i´m in the begining, but about your question what i have used to make grass look like grass is the vray displacement tool is great and easy to use. Paulo Silva best regards

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