clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR

tejalvirkar · October 31st, 2006

Hi!
Attached is an exterior image of a clubhouse garden sit out done with Vray & HDR. Need your comments for same to improve my work.
Thanx in advance.

sdds · October 31st, 2006

First off I like the composition, looks good & some good lighting. I feel the texturing doesn't work though, the brick walls look a bit mapped & clean. Maybe get some dirt maps on there or do some post painting in photoshop. I also feel the trees in the background are very flat and look fake. Also (being a bit fussy here) the dark wooden roof truss distracts my eye & looks cgish.

I hope this is of help m8.

visual3d · October 31st, 2006

A little bit more contras would help...could also improove on grass since youre using vray...higer settings in all mat subdivision would be great.

tejalvirkar · November 1st, 2006

Thanx Reza & simmon!
I will surely try to get the suggestions done.
Those r worthy and helpful for a person like me who is still learning& exploring Vray &HDR.

mahorela · November 2nd, 2006

Upping the bump on the bricks would help alot and in my opinion the image needs to be sharper (AA) (personal preference). I also think that the grass looks a little odd and indistinct (is it displacement?).

It can be hard sometimes working with HDRI to get the ideal lighting for your scene. By this I mean that although your lighting might suit the HDRI your using.....Does it provide lighting that best shows off your scene. In this case the lighting seems dull and cold whereas I would personally be looking for something warm and inviting here.

tejalvirkar · November 6th, 2006

Hi!
Please have a look at this and give feedback. Changes are done as per ur prior suggestions.
THanks!

mahorela · November 6th, 2006

huge improvement on the original.....very nice work

tejalvirkar · November 6th, 2006

Hi Bob!
THanx a lot.It was possible cause of suggestions that i received from u all.

edub · November 6th, 2006

what kind of slanted bricks are those?? never seen something like that

I guess they could exist, but you would have to make it look a bit more believable.

First of all, you mapping needs to be adjusted so that there is not a grout line at the bottom of the "arched" part (underside of flat part).

Secondly, you should consider a "soldier course" (vertical) of bricks for this same part, as it will imply greater structural integrity.

Of course, I have no idea if it's your intent to challenge conventional building methods.

Nice job otherwise!

tejalvirkar · November 6th, 2006

Hey erik!
Thanx for ur valuable suggesstions. As far as the slanting brick and mapping goes i agree with u. But the part of vertical tiling didn't get. Can u explain? Actually i am learning to work with vray & HDR so...mistakes.
Would be glad if u give the tips always.

October 31st, 2006	#2 (permalink)
sdds Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Kent Age: 26 Posts: 196 Name: Simon Odds	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR First off I like the composition, looks good & some good lighting. I feel the texturing doesn't work though, the brick walls look a bit mapped & clean. Maybe get some dirt maps on there or do some post painting in photoshop. I also feel the trees in the background are very flat and look fake. Also (being a bit fussy here) the dark wooden roof truss distracts my eye & looks cgish. I hope this is of help m8.

October 31st, 2006	#3 (permalink)
visual3d Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Kuala Lumpur Age: 33 Posts: 39 Name: Reza Bahari	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR A little bit more contras would help...could also improove on grass since youre using vray...higer settings in all mat subdivision would be great.

November 1st, 2006	#4 (permalink)
tejalvirkar Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pune Posts: 21 Name: Tejal Virkar	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR Thanx Reza & simmon! I will surely try to get the suggestions done. Those r worthy and helpful for a person like me who is still learning& exploring Vray &HDR. __________________ TV

November 2nd, 2006	#5 (permalink)
mahorela Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Perth Posts: 504 Name: bob mahorela	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR Upping the bump on the bricks would help alot and in my opinion the image needs to be sharper (AA) (personal preference). I also think that the grass looks a little odd and indistinct (is it displacement?). It can be hard sometimes working with HDRI to get the ideal lighting for your scene. By this I mean that although your lighting might suit the HDRI your using.....Does it provide lighting that best shows off your scene. In this case the lighting seems dull and cold whereas I would personally be looking for something warm and inviting here.

November 6th, 2006	#7 (permalink)
mahorela Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Perth Posts: 504 Name: bob mahorela	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR huge improvement on the original.....very nice work

November 6th, 2006	#8 (permalink)
tejalvirkar Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pune Posts: 21 Name: Tejal Virkar	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR Hi Bob! THanx a lot.It was possible cause of suggestions that i received from u all. __________________ TV

November 6th, 2006	#9 (permalink)
edub Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: SF Age: 36 Posts: 282 Name: erik west	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR what kind of slanted bricks are those?? never seen something like that I guess they could exist, but you would have to make it look a bit more believable. First of all, you mapping needs to be adjusted so that there is not a grout line at the bottom of the "arched" part (underside of flat part). Secondly, you should consider a "soldier course" (vertical) of bricks for this same part, as it will imply greater structural integrity. Of course, I have no idea if it's your intent to challenge conventional building methods. Nice job otherwise!

November 6th, 2006	#10 (permalink)
tejalvirkar Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Pune Posts: 21 Name: Tejal Virkar	Re: clubhouse garden sit out-Vray & HDR Hey erik! Thanx for ur valuable suggesstions. As far as the slanting brick and mapping goes i agree with u. But the part of vertical tiling didn't get. Can u explain? Actually i am learning to work with vray & HDR so...mistakes. Would be glad if u give the tips always. __________________ TV

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