Re: Flavio Ochoa Final
Hi Flavio,
I can see you have obviously had some time constraints on this project. I do like your image a lot. I think the concept is very good and the organic shapes work well. Its very different to the angular shapes of the tower but i like the contrast between the two design styles.
Lighting ideas are nice and colouring works well, but it just needs that extra few days to have worked up the landscape and environment. The sea does look more like a lake as it's very calm and the scale looks a bit off.
I would have left out the characters in the boats as i think (as i mentioned before) its hard to get the same quality with characters unless you have lots of time to texture.
I think it works well as a conceptual image rather than a photoreal image and look forward to seeing more development in the animation stage.
Good Luck!
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