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Old May 18th, 2008   #4 (permalink)
Horhe
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Default Re: RP's residence

Overall looks good.
Some crits:
1) Image seems blurry could use some sharpening
2) It looking too gray I recon. Try adding a yellow/blue tint. A combination of those two colours will get you a more realistic image.
3) The vegetation seems blurry and overall too dim. Might use some brighness/contrast.
4) The compostion looks a bit boring. Too much asphalt is showing - either get a car in or cut some of the road off.
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