Re: Mohammed Ullah - Final
Mohammed, your image is reminiscent of concept art for a movie, although I have to be honest - I brought it into Photoshop and removed the bird and loved it 10x more. I think the birds in the distance are a nice touch but you have to think hard about making entourage so prominent.
I like that you've paid so much attention to color as a complement to the composition. The image has a nice left to right and right to left feel to it and the color gradation is a big reason for that. It's also nice that you've taken great care to articulate the cliff and water, and where they meet.
As for the design, there's nothing that really grabs me. I see interesting elements but they're not unified in any way. I think that looking at ways to use lighting to make elements pop, like the bridge for example, would be worthwhile.
Lots of potential and a very nice image. Looking forward to the animation.
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Rodrigo J Lopez
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