can any tell me how to improve this image

ishpalsingh · August 21st, 2003

can any tell me how to improve this image
i hav done this image in viz 4+brazil r/s

Rick Eloy · August 21st, 2003

Hi!
Well,welcome to CGA!
About your image, I think it's a little too washed. Try increasing the contrast. Besides, some background would do wonders to it!
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Rick

ishpalsingh · August 21st, 2003

thanx rick,i will try ur suggestion & post a new image

Uirsu · August 22nd, 2003

Hey ishpalsingh (i had to copy and paste this

)
Very nice render, but one thing i have to say is for you try put the camera and taget on the same heigh to avoid vertical deformation on the building.

And other issue is the glass, that is very strange, there are some ways to improve:
-Model the interior and set it transparent
_Set it Black
_Set it reflective and put somethign to reflec, even a background image (or use a HDRI render)

Hugs

RezMAN · August 22nd, 2003

Hi,

I like your model, very nice detail...However I think a little texturing could really help,

my 2 cents:

- I would like to see some dirt maps, in the 3D world everything is too clean. Real life isn't it's actually very dirty, this should improve your render and add a little more realism.

- I agree with Uirsu, the windows need a little more work, Uirsu's suggestion works very well. When I get lazy I don't even model an interior, I just place a plane(grid) behind the window and map a nice blind or curtain texture on it...

finally...

- perhaps a closer camera angle could add more interest to your shot, sometime it's nice to leave some detail up to the imagination....

Keep up the good work!

ishpalsingh · August 22nd, 2003

thanx all for suggestions

Victor Erthal · August 22nd, 2003

The image seems a little too bright for me, you could try to reduce the amount of skylight in the scene and maybe reduce the power of the bounced energy.

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Rick Eloy Moderator Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: São Paulo, Brasil Age: 31 Posts: 2,388 Name: Ricardo Eloy	Hi! Well,welcome to CGA! About your image, I think it's a little too washed. Try increasing the contrast. Besides, some background would do wonders to it! [] Rick __________________ Rick Eloy reb digital - Really, I'm doing it for the kids...

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Uirsu Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Belo Horizonte Age: 28 Posts: 112 Name: Wilson Iwazawa	Hey ishpalsingh (i had to copy and paste this ) Very nice render, but one thing i have to say is for you try put the camera and taget on the same heigh to avoid vertical deformation on the building. And other issue is the glass, that is very strange, there are some ways to improve: -Model the interior and set it transparent _Set it Black _Set it reflective and put somethign to reflec, even a background image (or use a HDRI render) Hugs __________________ My portfolio: Virtualmente

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August 21st, 2003	#1 (permalink)
ishpalsingh Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: punjab Posts: 250 Name: ishpal singh	can any tell me how to improve this image i hav done this image in viz 4+brazil r/s

August 21st, 2003	#3 (permalink)
ishpalsingh Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: punjab Posts: 250 Name: ishpal singh	thanx rick,i will try ur suggestion & post a new image

August 22nd, 2003	#5 (permalink)
RezMAN Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Toronto Posts: 31 Name: Laszlo Frideczky	Hi, I like your model, very nice detail...However I think a little texturing could really help, my 2 cents: - I would like to see some dirt maps, in the 3D world everything is too clean. Real life isn't it's actually very dirty, this should improve your render and add a little more realism. - I agree with Uirsu, the windows need a little more work, Uirsu's suggestion works very well. When I get lazy I don't even model an interior, I just place a plane(grid) behind the window and map a nice blind or curtain texture on it... finally... - perhaps a closer camera angle could add more interest to your shot, sometime it's nice to leave some detail up to the imagination.... Keep up the good work!

August 22nd, 2003	#6 (permalink)
ishpalsingh Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: punjab Posts: 250 Name: ishpal singh	thanx all for suggestions

August 22nd, 2003	#7 (permalink)
Victor Erthal Senior Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Boston MA Age: 31 Posts: 256 Name: Victor Erthal	The image seems a little too bright for me, you could try to reduce the amount of skylight in the scene and maybe reduce the power of the bounced energy.

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