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Old January 21st, 2007   #1 (permalink)
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Default Reception Interior..

Hi,

This's a commercial interior I did 2 months ago, tell me your openion plz.

Thanks very much..

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Too simple

I like the ceiling texture . it like an arabesque work wood . but I wonder about the huge white area of the window it confusing me … why do not put some background . and it same to me that the door open …there are just the frame.

May be a squire table will be moor comfort
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I like the lighting, specially the light from the ceiling.. nice floor reflection. But I wonder why you put all the sofa so close to each other ...in this big space you can arrange the sofa in a more convenient spacing..and for the window try to put some curtains..keep up the gud work.
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Default Re: Reception Interior..

I think the composition of this shot could be greatly improved by simply bringing the camera closer to your chairs so you don't see so much empty space. The quality of the render itself is great though.
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