Aaron Coon - WIP - Page 2

enigma · April 30th, 2007

I 'd go with the sun position on the second image, and hey, your caustics plan could pop out a lot better with that lighting. keep it coming

szi_zsolt · April 30th, 2007

Hi !

I prefer the second sun position (although we have only one Sun

.

Cheers !

leed · April 30th, 2007

Arron

I prefer the second sun position It brings a lot of interest in the floor and seating in the foreground.
the view needs something in the lower left by I think the hot tub is a bit distracting it stops my eye moving into the picture.
Perhaps it is the shape, and the sun light hitting the rim... I would like to see the viewer being drawn into the image a bit more....

But it is just my opinion, sun position is great.

Lee

wodewil · April 30th, 2007

Hello Arron!

If you'll follow this atmosphere as is on picture 2 it would be very fresh morning

It's very brave idea to do caustics in vizualization. I love it! In my opinion it will be hard to generate caustics with sun in that direct (secound picture) I think that sun schould be behind back a little bit. But i like it (picture No. 2) anyway!

waiting for more

nok li · April 30th, 2007

I think both lights of two images are ok. If you chose the second image, adding some lights inside would help to get a better effet.
Waiting for your further image!

Neha · April 30th, 2007

Aaron...there is something distracting about the hot tub on left hand side. I feel the shape is not going with rest of the forms. Or it might just be its position, maybe shift it a little right and towards the camera? I agree with everyone on the second sun position...it is looking great. What are your plans for the empty space on right side of image?

BR1AN · April 30th, 2007

I am liking both of the sun positions, however if I think number 2 would work the best for the pool caustics.

aaron-cds · April 30th, 2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neha

What are your plans for the empty space on right side of image?

http://www.cgarchitect.com/vb/160978-post6.html

As far as the tub goes, I think you're right. I need to resolve this.

Just to clear the air, I never said I would be doing caustics for certain. I sure would like to try if it works out.

CHE · April 30th, 2007

Hi Aaron,

I personally like the first sun location. The second option is casting shadows on your main facade so it is hiding from the viewer some of the nice details in the model. Also, I agree about the hot tub feeling out of place in the composition. Try showing more of it so that it is formerly in the foreground. I am looking forward to see how this wip develops.

Ernesto

miaomiao lin · April 30th, 2007

Hi Aaron,
the near view and prospects of the appearance can even enrich some, expect this charming villa, good luck

April 30th, 2007	#11 (permalink)
enigma Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Imus, Cavite, PH Age: 29 Posts: 342 Name: Bryan Jumarang	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP I 'd go with the sun position on the second image, and hey, your caustics plan could pop out a lot better with that lighting. keep it coming __________________ WIP...

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szi_zsolt Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Budapest Age: 33 Posts: 21 Name: Sz Zsolt	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Hi ! I prefer the second sun position (although we have only one Sun . Cheers !

April 30th, 2007	#13 (permalink)
leed Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Cardiff Posts: 178 Name: Lee David	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Arron I prefer the second sun position It brings a lot of interest in the floor and seating in the foreground. the view needs something in the lower left by I think the hot tub is a bit distracting it stops my eye moving into the picture. Perhaps it is the shape, and the sun light hitting the rim... I would like to see the viewer being drawn into the image a bit more.... But it is just my opinion, sun position is great. Lee __________________ www.buzzbox.eu

April 30th, 2007	#14 (permalink)
wodewil Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Wroclaw Posts: 229 Name: Lukasz Truchalski	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Hello Arron! If you'll follow this atmosphere as is on picture 2 it would be very fresh morning It's very brave idea to do caustics in vizualization. I love it! In my opinion it will be hard to generate caustics with sun in that direct (secound picture) I think that sun schould be behind back a little bit. But i like it (picture No. 2) anyway! waiting for more

April 30th, 2007	#15 (permalink)
nok li Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Beijing Posts: 30 Name: Lu JinLong	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP I think both lights of two images are ok. If you chose the second image, adding some lights inside would help to get a better effet. Waiting for your further image!

April 30th, 2007	#16 (permalink)
Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Aaron...there is something distracting about the hot tub on left hand side. I feel the shape is not going with rest of the forms. Or it might just be its position, maybe shift it a little right and towards the camera? I agree with everyone on the second sun position...it is looking great. What are your plans for the empty space on right side of image? __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

April 30th, 2007	#17 (permalink)
BR1AN Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 111 Name: Brian Clark	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP I am liking both of the sun positions, however if I think number 2 would work the best for the pool caustics.

April 30th, 2007	#19 (permalink)
CHE Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: St. Louis Posts: 818 Name: Ernesto Pacheco	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Hi Aaron, I personally like the first sun location. The second option is casting shadows on your main facade so it is hiding from the viewer some of the nice details in the model. Also, I agree about the hot tub feeling out of place in the composition. Try showing more of it so that it is formerly in the foreground. I am looking forward to see how this wip develops. Ernesto

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miaomiao lin Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: beijing Posts: 100 Name: miaomiao lin	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Hi Aaron, the near view and prospects of the appearance can even enrich some, expect this charming villa, good luck

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