Aaron Coon - WIP - Page 3

aaron-cds · May 1st, 2007

Ok, I'll admit it. The hot tub idea isn't panning out. It seems to compete too much with the pool. I'm going to go back to an original intention for the foreground, landscape.

Brian Smith · May 1st, 2007

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Originally Posted by aaron-cds

Here in Tuscany, we like our roof tiles big. AH AH AH. Thanks for the comments. The model was provided by Brian Smith. I've yet to do any modeling. The contestents are provided with 5 models to choose from. Brian, are those roof tiles too big?

Just saw this question...nah, those tiles are standard size...12inches. It's deceiving cuz the house is really not that large as the architecture would have you believe.

julie hsieh · May 4th, 2007

Aaron,

I like the 1st one better, I think it allows options to cast more interesting shadows (for instance in the covered porch areas.) It also highlights the main focus of the image. While the 2nd one does have a different effect, your main focus is mostly in shade... that said if you are planning for 2ndary accent lighting, it wouldn't be so much an issue as they will help retrieve the focus back.

t1z10 · May 7th, 2007

I like your idea but in my opinion you should find someother for background; currently it's too much poor.
We're waiting for the rest. Great beginning.

zoli · May 11th, 2007

Hey even without textures you realy managed to catch the feeling in your story. And I don't completely agree with crazy homeless guy that you need to show more sky in the upper half of the image, because the house filling up the picture gives you a hint of luxuriance. Like I said, POV in your 1st post is closer to what I would like to see than POVs you posted later...

May 4th, 2007	#23 (permalink)
julie hsieh Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 70 Name: Julie Hsieh	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Aaron, I like the 1st one better, I think it allows options to cast more interesting shadows (for instance in the covered porch areas.) It also highlights the main focus of the image. While the 2nd one does have a different effect, your main focus is mostly in shade... that said if you are planning for 2ndary accent lighting, it wouldn't be so much an issue as they will help retrieve the focus back. __________________ Jogo Capoeira pra pode me libertar...

May 7th, 2007	#24 (permalink)
t1z10 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Florence, Italy Posts: 15 Name: Tiziano Fioriti	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP I like your idea but in my opinion you should find someother for background; currently it's too much poor. We're waiting for the rest. Great beginning. __________________ http://www.tizianofioriti.com

May 11th, 2007	#25 (permalink)
zoli Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Budapest Age: 29 Posts: 94 Name: Zoltan Kovacs	Re: Aaron Coon - WIP Hey even without textures you realy managed to catch the feeling in your story. And I don't completely agree with crazy homeless guy that you need to show more sky in the upper half of the image, because the house filling up the picture gives you a hint of luxuriance. Like I said, POV in your 1st post is closer to what I would like to see than POVs you posted later...

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