Neha Kakkar - WIP - Page 2

CHE · April 30th, 2007

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Originally Posted by Neha

Hi Earnesto, actually I have used negative vertical shift in the camera intentionally to give it a 3-point perspective view. My story demands the palace to look grand & majestic...so I've distorted the camera very slightly to create a more dramatic POV.

I see what you are going for; it sounds great. Then, I think that it would help if you exagerate the 3-point perspective a little bit more.

Neha · April 30th, 2007

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Originally Posted by CHE

I see what you are going for; it sounds great. Then, I think that it would help if you exagerate the 3-point perspective a little bit more.

Hmm...I'll try that...

Continuumx · May 1st, 2007

Hello Neha,

The lighting and sense of depth in these early images works very well. Something wonderful is coming! Keep up the great work!

julie hsieh · May 1st, 2007

Hi Neha,

I didn't know what a mughal garden was so I looked it up on google and learned something new today

One thing that jumped out at me and others have commented on was the 3point perspective. Perhaps it is because the composition is not yet resolved completely. I think after you model the garden and play with the angle of the camera slightly to include it, (wondering if the garden will be to the left hand side of the building), then if the view show more of the left facade with all the lines of the garden running to meet the building, the intended exageration might sit more appropriatedly and majestic.

Thumbs up for the speedy progress!

Neha · May 2nd, 2007

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Originally Posted by julie hsieh

Hi Neha,
One thing that jumped out at me and others have commented on was the 3point perspective. Perhaps it is because the composition is not yet resolved completely. I think after you model the garden and play with the angle of the camera slightly to include it, (wondering if the garden will be to the left hand side of the building), then if the view show more of the left facade with all the lines of the garden running to meet the building, the intended exageration might sit more appropriatedly and majestic.

Hi Julie...a mughal garden is present generally on all four sided of a building, the monument itself being at the center. Sometimes, not very often, it is present on three sides if the building is not at the center. So, here it will be on all four sides, though I'll cover only three facades are complete in the model.

I will consider the camera angle if after the final composition still it feels odd. I may post the both a distorted & a normal camera and take suggestions. But right now, I have a all new idea about a new camera angle...still lots of modeling to go before I can place the new one...

Neha · May 2nd, 2007

Thankyou Tyrone, miaomiao, Bryan, Harold & Joel for the encouraging words

julie hsieh · May 2nd, 2007

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Originally Posted by Neha

I will consider the camera angle if after the final composition still it feels odd. I may post the both a distorted & a normal camera and take suggestions. But right now, I have a all new idea about a new camera angle...still lots of modeling to go before I can place the new one...

...yeah, i had a feeling that it was too soon to post these comments. Don't mind it too much, I'm just rambling. It sounds like u have it under control either way. Can't wait to see your Mughal garden!

Neha · May 2nd, 2007

Not at all, always great to have suggestions. Infact sometimes others see the mistakes you tend to overlook due to spending a lot of time doing the same thing. So thanks a lot for the comments, they are always welcome

I'm doing the garden now...will post it once its done...

t1z10 · May 7th, 2007

Very good beginning.
We're waiting for your news

escargot · May 11th, 2007

Ehh, you like sunshine, don't you?

If you can treat light decently so that you can keep this much sunshine even with textures your image will look really 'uplifitng'. Or is there anybody who doesn't like sunshine?!

l'escargot

May 1st, 2007	#13 (permalink)
Continuumx Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: San Francisco Age: 37 Posts: 143 Name: Tyrone Marshall	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Hello Neha, The lighting and sense of depth in these early images works very well. Something wonderful is coming! Keep up the great work!

May 1st, 2007	#14 (permalink)
julie hsieh Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Toronto Age: 31 Posts: 70 Name: Julie Hsieh	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Hi Neha, I didn't know what a mughal garden was so I looked it up on google and learned something new today One thing that jumped out at me and others have commented on was the 3point perspective. Perhaps it is because the composition is not yet resolved completely. I think after you model the garden and play with the angle of the camera slightly to include it, (wondering if the garden will be to the left hand side of the building), then if the view show more of the left facade with all the lines of the garden running to meet the building, the intended exageration might sit more appropriatedly and majestic. Thumbs up for the speedy progress! __________________ Jogo Capoeira pra pode me libertar...

May 2nd, 2007	#16 (permalink)
Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Thankyou Tyrone, miaomiao, Bryan, Harold & Joel for the encouraging words __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

May 2nd, 2007	#18 (permalink)
Neha Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: India Posts: 220 Name: Neha Kakkar	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Not at all, always great to have suggestions. Infact sometimes others see the mistakes you tend to overlook due to spending a lot of time doing the same thing. So thanks a lot for the comments, they are always welcome I'm doing the garden now...will post it once its done... __________________ Only those who attempt the absurd will achieve the impossible. M. C. Escher 3DAllusions

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t1z10 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Florence, Italy Posts: 15 Name: Tiziano Fioriti	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Very good beginning. We're waiting for your news __________________ http://www.tizianofioriti.com

May 11th, 2007	#20 (permalink)
escargot Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Budapest Age: 29 Posts: 77 Name: Andras Miklos Balogh	Re: Neha Kakkar - WIP Ehh, you like sunshine, don't you? If you can treat light decently so that you can keep this much sunshine even with textures your image will look really 'uplifitng'. Or is there anybody who doesn't like sunshine?! l'escargot

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